All, please look at the below notes and write in changes to your scripts. We want to hear these changes during the read today. During lunch and costume fittings, please work on it. We can also take a few minutes at the top of the 4:00p rehearsal if necessary.
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Updates to Audition Draft
December 15, 2015
Updates to Audition Draft
December 15, 2015
Page 2
DION: Don’t go on./We neither of wanted what they planned.
Add “us”
Now reads: Don’t go on./We neither of us wanted what they planned.
DION: Don’t go on./We neither of wanted what they planned.
Add “us”
Now reads: Don’t go on./We neither of us wanted what they planned.
Page 13
stage direction: [covering his eys]
should read: [covering his eyes]
stage direction: [covering his eys]
should read: [covering his eyes]
Page 18
TREY: . . . Anywhere else you can be found a lot?
Change to
TREY: . . . Anywhere else we might run into each other?
TREY: . . . Anywhere else you can be found a lot?
Change to
TREY: . . . Anywhere else we might run into each other?
Page 22
TREY: Kind of old. Couple of eight-year-old turtles.
Change “eight” to “eighty”
TREY: Kind of old. Couple of eighty-year-old turtles.
TREY: Kind of old. Couple of eight-year-old turtles.
Change “eight” to “eighty”
TREY: Kind of old. Couple of eighty-year-old turtles.
Page 27
ERDOS: . . . So swippity swap.
Change to
ERDOS: . . . Slip, wobble, kerplop.
ERDOS: . . . So swippity swap.
Change to
ERDOS: . . . Slip, wobble, kerplop.
Page 29
QUEASY: But my legs are on fire,
Cut “But”
Now reads: My legs are on fire,
QUEASY: But my legs are on fire,
Cut “But”
Now reads: My legs are on fire,
Page 49
ALFA: Delta writes a note in illegible scratches, nobody catches, turns it in for us, note says
Cut “note says”
Now reads: Delta writes a note in illegible scratches, nobody catches, turns it in for us: [new cue for DELTA]
ALFA: Delta writes a note in illegible scratches, nobody catches, turns it in for us, note says
Cut “note says”
Now reads: Delta writes a note in illegible scratches, nobody catches, turns it in for us: [new cue for DELTA]
Page 49
BERNIE: . . . sent her down there. In no time, she comes back, braggin’ like a smokestack,
Change to
BERNIE: . . . sent her down there. Next to no time, Delta’s back, puffed up big, and braggin’ like a smokestack:
BERNIE: . . . sent her down there. In no time, she comes back, braggin’ like a smokestack,
Change to
BERNIE: . . . sent her down there. Next to no time, Delta’s back, puffed up big, and braggin’ like a smokestack:
Page 50
ALF: Nothing about those sentences were right.
Change to: Nothing about that sounded right.
ALF: Nothing about those sentences were right.
Change to: Nothing about that sounded right.
Page 54
ALF: . . . How they’re gonna do harm to the person they couldn’t move,
Change to: . . . How they’re gonna deal with the person they couldn’t move,
ALF: . . . How they’re gonna do harm to the person they couldn’t move,
Change to: . . . How they’re gonna deal with the person they couldn’t move,
Page 54
CHARLEY: And they’ll assume I’m Bernie, see, that’s the story, innit?
Reassign next part of line to GREG,: I’m getting it now—it just took me a minute.
and cut second “it”
Now reads:
CHARLEY: And they’ll assume I’m Bernie, see, that’s the story, innit?
GREG: I’m getting it now—just took me a minute.
CHARLEY: Sure, bring ‘em on, they can’t cut me. . . .
CHARLEY: And they’ll assume I’m Bernie, see, that’s the story, innit?
Reassign next part of line to GREG,: I’m getting it now—it just took me a minute.
and cut second “it”
Now reads:
CHARLEY: And they’ll assume I’m Bernie, see, that’s the story, innit?
GREG: I’m getting it now—just took me a minute.
CHARLEY: Sure, bring ‘em on, they can’t cut me. . . .
Page 55
FARLEY: Alf couldn’t wait/Once he figured it out,/Had to shout:
Change “he” to “she”
Now reads: Alf couldn’t wait/Once she figured it out,/Had to shout:
FARLEY: Alf couldn’t wait/Once he figured it out,/Had to shout:
Change “he” to “she”
Now reads: Alf couldn’t wait/Once she figured it out,/Had to shout:
Page 57
GREG: Oh, I get it. When he leaves
Somebody takes his place . . .
Change “he” to “she” and “his” to “her”
GREG: Oh, I get it. When she leaves
Somebody takes her place . . .
GREG: Oh, I get it. When he leaves
Somebody takes his place . . .
Change “he” to “she” and “his” to “her”
GREG: Oh, I get it. When she leaves
Somebody takes her place . . .
Page 62
DAR: . . . Soon Spring will come reward us for patience,
Change to
DAR: . . . Soon Spring will come reward you for your patience,
DAR: . . . Soon Spring will come reward us for patience,
Change to
DAR: . . . Soon Spring will come reward you for your patience,
